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1 Prologue
“Agh.. Get away from me! Fight like a man.” The boy picks up his weapon and rolls up from the ground, while doing so he slices wildly into the air... A bright light appears.
This is the story of a boy called Therros Fendrial , but a soldier in a dangerous world. He has been trough a lot of fighting to reach his age. But little did he know that the most dangerous fight was yet at hand and that he , the 19 year old boy , would become a hero.
2 The signs.
“Where are you going Therros?” “General Lathian has sent me and four others out to scout the forests. Times are getting dark my friend... Nothing good is at hand.” “Be safe out there Therros. Don't let your pride and honor take over.. run if you're going to lose.” “I will.” Therros says as he takes off on his horse.
He rides like the wind, trough a forest where sunlight is scarce and monsters lure in every corner. Along his way he finds nothing but trees until he hears a voice in his head , a warm voice calling for him. “Come Therros. Find me.” He tells his companions he will follow the other road , because splitting up would be a lot faster. Denying all of their requests to come with him he rides off to find a stone. “What.. What is this?” He approaches the stone and with every step its glow grows brighter and its voice grows louder.
As soon as he wants to touch the stone he gets distracted by an attacking wolf. He grabs his blade and waits for it to attack , and so it does. In its flight Therros sticks his blade trough the wolf's neck and puts it to the ground. “It's eyes... they're red... I have to report this to the general.”
Back at the kingdom Therros runs towards the general, pushing countless people to the side. “General Lathian!” “Yes , Therros?” “During the expedition I got attacked by a wolf and...” “What of it?” “it's eyes were red...”
3 The warning
“This can't be good. That is a sign that the forest is getting overrun with evil Therros. Go and warn your family. This can get rough.”
And so Therros runs home to tell his mother and his sister. “Mom, Holly!” “What is it?” “The forests. Do not go out there anymore, not alone.” “Why son?” “It's turning evil.” Therros told them what happened and they begged for him not to go out there anymore, but he has to , he is a soldier.
Therros goes to sleep. “What a weird day it was” he whispers to himself. “That stone.. I... I can still hear it talking to me... It sounds so welcome, so...warm?” Therros closes his eyes and falls asleep.
4 The Dream
“Ugh.... Where am I now?” Therros glances at the sky as he sees a white spirit with golden hair float down to where he stands. “You are in your dreams, young Therros..” “Who are you?” “Who I am does not matter. I am just here to send you a message. Tomorrow you shall go to the glowing stone, once you're there you will have to hold it a-.” “How would you know what I'm going to do. What is that stone anyways?” He looks into the spirit's eyes , she closes her eyes almost as if she wanted to hide something. “It's a portal... to another world.” “What, you want me to go into another world? I refuse to go there!” “They need you Therros , think about someone else for once! The people in there are in peril!” “No.. I am not a hero.” “Very well. They'll die , but you, you will be out here as just one more soldier , one more enemy for the darkness. If you decide to go to the stone anyways hold it and say these words: Veil Ykan Zek.”
The woman was gone. He walked around in his dream. His mind was restless. 'What do I do now , how did I get out of here.' He began to feel pain in his head. And before he knew it he passed out.
5 The World has changed.
He woke up , surprised as he was that he was in his own bed he walked up to the window and saw the city under attack by the darkness. He put on his armor and ran straight to General Lathian , but before he even reached the barracks he heard the voice in his head again: “You won't win this fight Therros , one soldier more or less won't count. Run from this fight and go to the stone. I promise you that once you're done there... your city will be a lot more safe.” Without wondering about why somebody could easily talk to him trough his mind he ran into the forest saying to himself: “You're right... I can't fight an army off... I'm no hero. If this is a better chance of safety I'll take it.”
As soon as he found the stone he felt calm. The warmth of it's glow made him feel like he never did before, he got lured into it again. Once he came to holding it he felt so powerful , so much more like a man than he'd ever be. He tried remembering the words: “Ehh... Veil Kazek! No.. Veil Ykan Zek!!” Nothing happened... it took a moment until he had noticed his eyes being shut. And when he opened them...
6 A world of difference.
The world was red and the red floor beneath him felt like rock. He was in a room, a small room with a bed , a sink and a toilet, when he looked around he saw that he was in an enclosed prison cell , with a little source of light just behind the metal bars holding him in this room. “I knew this was a trick! I knew it!” A man with an evil grin on his face walked towards his cell. “I am the host of this show Therros, I see my girl did a great job on luring you in?” “You bastard! My people needed me!” “They shall not stand anyways. They'll hold out for.... two weeks, maybe a month?” A girl was standing behind the man, she had blue eyes, red hair and a shy look on her face. Unlike the man she seemed to have emotions even though she tried to hide it.
The man had left him alone with the girl. “Are you... Are you the one that got me into this?” “Yes Therros. But you can get out of here. My father wants me to be his bait and if I don't do it I'll surely get punished. I don't want you being in here either.” “Then let me out! What is this place anyways?!” “It's an arena , here you will have to fight 8 rounds. Each round usually takes one day unless you cower and hide , then it might take a while longer. After each round you'll have a day to rest, eat, drink and get prepared because you'll be fighting for your life out there... Look I have to go... My father doesn't want me to be around the fighters.” “Wait!” She left , leaving him to think about the situation he was in. “I'm screwed! I can't do this, I'm not a warrior!” He sat down on his bed. Under his sheets he found a note. “Your first fight will be tomorrow. Welcome to Hell Mr Fendrial.”
7. The first fight
Therros walked into the arena , the entry way closed behind him.
1 Prologue
“Agh.. Get away from me! Fight like a man.” The boy picks up his weapon and rolls up from the ground, while doing so he slices wildly into the air... A bright light appears.
This is the story of a boy called Therros Fendrial , but a soldier in a dangerous world. He has been trough a lot of fighting to reach his age. But little did he know that the most dangerous fight was yet at hand and that he , the 19 year old boy , would become a hero.
2 The signs.
“Where are you going Therros?” “General Lathian has sent me and four others out to scout the forests. Times are getting dark my friend... Nothing good is at hand.” “Be safe out there Therros. Don't let your pride and honor take over.. run if you're going to lose.” “I will.” Therros says as he takes off on his horse.
He rides like the wind, trough a forest where sunlight is scarce and monsters lure in every corner. Along his way he finds nothing but trees until he hears a voice in his head , a warm voice calling for him. “Come Therros. Find me.” He tells his companions he will follow the other road , because splitting up would be a lot faster. Denying all of their requests to come with him he rides off to find a stone. “What.. What is this?” He approaches the stone and with every step its glow grows brighter and its voice grows louder.
As soon as he wants to touch the stone he gets distracted by an attacking wolf. He grabs his blade and waits for it to attack , and so it does. In its flight Therros sticks his blade trough the wolf's neck and puts it to the ground. “It's eyes... they're red... I have to report this to the general.”
Back at the kingdom Therros runs towards the general, pushing countless people to the side. “General Lathian!” “Yes , Therros?” “During the expedition I got attacked by a wolf and...” “What of it?” “it's eyes were red...”
3 The warning
“This can't be good. That is a sign that the forest is getting overrun with evil Therros. Go and warn your family. This can get rough.”
And so Therros runs home to tell his mother and his sister. “Mom, Holly!” “What is it?” “The forests. Do not go out there anymore, not alone.” “Why son?” “It's turning evil.” Therros told them what happened and they begged for him not to go out there anymore, but he has to , he is a soldier.
Therros goes to sleep. “What a weird day it was” he whispers to himself. “That stone.. I... I can still hear it talking to me... It sounds so welcome, so...warm?” Therros closes his eyes and falls asleep.
4 The Dream
“Ugh.... Where am I now?” Therros glances at the sky as he sees a white spirit with golden hair float down to where he stands. “You are in your dreams, young Therros..” “Who are you?” “Who I am does not matter. I am just here to send you a message. Tomorrow you shall go to the glowing stone, once you're there you will have to hold it a-.” “How would you know what I'm going to do. What is that stone anyways?” He looks into the spirit's eyes , she closes her eyes almost as if she wanted to hide something. “It's a portal... to another world.” “What, you want me to go into another world? I refuse to go there!” “They need you Therros , think about someone else for once! The people in there are in peril!” “No.. I am not a hero.” “Very well. They'll die , but you, you will be out here as just one more soldier , one more enemy for the darkness. If you decide to go to the stone anyways hold it and say these words: Veil Ykan Zek.”
The woman was gone. He walked around in his dream. His mind was restless. 'What do I do now , how did I get out of here.' He began to feel pain in his head. And before he knew it he passed out.
5 The World has changed.
He woke up , surprised as he was that he was in his own bed he walked up to the window and saw the city under attack by the darkness. He put on his armor and ran straight to General Lathian , but before he even reached the barracks he heard the voice in his head again: “You won't win this fight Therros , one soldier more or less won't count. Run from this fight and go to the stone. I promise you that once you're done there... your city will be a lot more safe.” Without wondering about why somebody could easily talk to him trough his mind he ran into the forest saying to himself: “You're right... I can't fight an army off... I'm no hero. If this is a better chance of safety I'll take it.”
As soon as he found the stone he felt calm. The warmth of it's glow made him feel like he never did before, he got lured into it again. Once he came to holding it he felt so powerful , so much more like a man than he'd ever be. He tried remembering the words: “Ehh... Veil Kazek! No.. Veil Ykan Zek!!” Nothing happened... it took a moment until he had noticed his eyes being shut. And when he opened them...
6 A world of difference.
The world was red and the red floor beneath him felt like rock. He was in a room, a small room with a bed , a sink and a toilet, when he looked around he saw that he was in an enclosed prison cell , with a little source of light just behind the metal bars holding him in this room. “I knew this was a trick! I knew it!” A man with an evil grin on his face walked towards his cell. “I am the host of this show Therros, I see my girl did a great job on luring you in?” “You bastard! My people needed me!” “They shall not stand anyways. They'll hold out for.... two weeks, maybe a month?” A girl was standing behind the man, she had blue eyes, red hair and a shy look on her face. Unlike the man she seemed to have emotions even though she tried to hide it.
The man had left him alone with the girl. “Are you... Are you the one that got me into this?” “Yes Therros. But you can get out of here. My father wants me to be his bait and if I don't do it I'll surely get punished. I don't want you being in here either.” “Then let me out! What is this place anyways?!” “It's an arena , here you will have to fight 8 rounds. Each round usually takes one day unless you cower and hide , then it might take a while longer. After each round you'll have a day to rest, eat, drink and get prepared because you'll be fighting for your life out there... Look I have to go... My father doesn't want me to be around the fighters.” “Wait!” She left , leaving him to think about the situation he was in. “I'm screwed! I can't do this, I'm not a warrior!” He sat down on his bed. Under his sheets he found a note. “Your first fight will be tomorrow. Welcome to Hell Mr Fendrial.”
7. The first fight
Therros walked into the arena , the entry way closed behind him.
